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03-19-2007, 10:44 AM
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Rivet Master 
1964 22' Safari
Elyria
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Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 780
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Allright Maxandgeorgia are on board, I knew we could count on you to participate. Let's start this again in a new thread.
Bob
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03-19-2007, 10:49 AM
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old thread works
links us 2 past
tie that binds...
tires slowly groan
as wheels begin to roll
airstream in motion
cheers
2air'
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all of the true things that i am about to tell you are shameless lies. l.b.j.
we are here on earth to fart around. don't let anybody tell you any different. k.v.
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03-19-2007, 10:55 AM
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3 Rivet Member 
Join Date: Feb 2007
Posts: 127
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 1 little 2 little 3 little rivets.. 4 little 5 little... oh sorry that's the wrong song..
how about a riveting we will go, a riveting we will go...
or maybe shine on down the highway, baby moons a rolling...
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03-19-2007, 11:06 AM
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Rivet Master
1964 22' Safari
Elyria
, Ohio
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 780
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Airstream, Argosy
many places to go see
sea to shining sea
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03-19-2007, 11:09 AM
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Rivet Master
1995 30' Limited
Ashland
, Missouri
Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 2,610
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Come on, old and new, er. . .former and potential writers of Haiku. . .join in and let's see where the '07 Annual Haiku contest, first proposed by Drboyd, can take us. ~G
Clearcoat aging fast
Splotches mar the silver gleam
Love her anyway
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maxandgeorgia
1995 Airstream Classic Limited 30' ~ Gypsy
1978 Argosy Minuet, 6.0~Minnie/GPZWGN
Chev Silverado 2500HD Duramax/Allison, 4X4, Crew Cab
WBCCI #5013 AIR #2908
WDCU
Go, Mizzou...Tigers on the prowl!
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03-22-2007, 03:53 PM
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#146
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Rivet Master
1964 22' Safari
Elyria
, Ohio
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 780
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Haiku to you
Sleepy campground stirs
hatchet on log, hollow thud
sweet smell of coffee
And I want to do a rewrite of this one.
Airstream, Argosy,
nowhere to far to go see
shining sea to sea
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03-27-2007, 03:42 PM
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Head Animal Wrangler
2010 19' International
2015 Interstate Ext. Coach
Los Osos
, California
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 4,696
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That hose, she knows
Is never to be used
For washing clothes.
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03-27-2007, 04:11 PM
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Rivet Master
1964 22' Safari
Elyria
, Ohio
Join Date: Dec 2002
Posts: 780
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Before the shine
Faded, jaded, blue
silver luster peeking thru
Bambi sixty two
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03-28-2007, 03:35 PM
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1 Rivet Member 
1970 27' Overlander
ALGOMA
, Wisconsin
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 12
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Well In NE Wisconsin we're about 1 month away for the maiden voyage for 07. Can't wait!
Vintage Silver Beast
Our Clever Needy Mistress
Hopelessly Smitten
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03-28-2007, 04:46 PM
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#150
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2 Rivet Member 
1970 31' Sovereign
1963 26' Overlander
Greeneville
, Tennessee
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 60
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Wife must not read !
I must post more often....too much I have to learn... too much lurking, but here goes.
Thirty Eight Hundred
Seemed like a good price to me
My wife knows no better
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If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there
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03-28-2007, 05:30 PM
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Site Team
1964 26' Overlander
1964 19' Globetrotter
OlyPen
, Washington
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 13,934
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Originally Posted by summerkid
BONG! eight syllables in that second line, psych.
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A hiaku on form...
five syllables first
then seven in the middle
last line has five too
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03-28-2007, 05:35 PM
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2 Rivet Member
1970 31' Sovereign
1963 26' Overlander
Greeneville
, Tennessee
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 60
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OOOPs I can't count
I Goofed...Last line should read " Wife knows no better"
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If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there
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01-21-2008, 06:24 PM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
, USA, PLANET EARTH, MILKY WAY, LOCAL GROUP, SPIRALING SLOWLY THROUGH THE UNIVERSE
Join Date: Jul 2006
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Airstream Haiku
The Japanese poetry form Haiku is generally written about nature. Well what could be more "natural" on this forum than Airstream?
The haiku form is 5 syllables, then 7 , then 5 again to complete a poem.
Here is mine to start things off:
Silver chariot
Freedom of the open road
Airstream motorhome
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These aren't the droids you're looking for.
You can go about your business.
Move along.
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01-21-2008, 07:29 PM
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already big thread,
much haiku 4 you 2 view...
read here, add yours too!
http://www.airforums.com/forums/f161...test-8895.html
cheers
2air'
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using the search tool,
honors those that came before...
a good thing 'hopper!
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and it is NO game
haiku can be viewed by all...
don't like games, it's true!
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all of the true things that i am about to tell you are shameless lies. l.b.j.
we are here on earth to fart around. don't let anybody tell you any different. k.v.
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01-21-2008, 08:53 PM
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4 Rivet Member 
1971 23' Safari
Richmond
, Kentucky
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 376
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Of all my digits,
I love opposable thumbs most,
Holding Airstream Keys.
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Non impediti ratione cogitationis
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01-22-2008, 05:01 AM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
, USA, PLANET EARTH, MILKY WAY, LOCAL GROUP, SPIRALING SLOWLY THROUGH THE UNIVERSE
Join Date: Jul 2006
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I didn't see here
Haiku as a diversion
Perhaps this thread moves
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These aren't the droids you're looking for.
You can go about your business.
Move along.
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01-22-2008, 10:15 AM
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Rivet Master
1964 22' Safari
SACRAMENTO
, California
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 11,563
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Airstreaming through the
Summer, Winter, Spring and Fall
Brings Joy to one's Life
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01-22-2008, 10:29 AM
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#158
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pipes freeze in cold
roof leaks during summer rain
water shines too!
cheers
2air'
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all of the true things that i am about to tell you are shameless lies. l.b.j.
we are here on earth to fart around. don't let anybody tell you any different. k.v.
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01-22-2008, 10:35 AM
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#159
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Rivet Master
1969 23' Safari
New Orleans
, Louisiana
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 699
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womb of planet mine
aluminum polish shine
or leave it funky
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01-22-2008, 10:39 AM
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polish for the vain
surface fades as seasons change
true shine is inside
cheers
2air'
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all of the true things that i am about to tell you are shameless lies. l.b.j.
we are here on earth to fart around. don't let anybody tell you any different. k.v.
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