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11-11-2011, 02:33 PM
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Rivet Master 
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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We act alone, above thoughtfulness, less selfishly.
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Acting alone we may become less considerate.
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11-11-2011, 04:16 PM
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1999 25' Safari
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Acting alone we may become less considerate.
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May we become considerate regarding other people.
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11-13-2011, 10:56 AM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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May we become considerate regarding other people.
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People certainly appreciate when we become considerate.
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11-14-2011, 11:44 AM
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
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People certainly appreciate when we become considerate.
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Certainly they appreciate when we recognize them.
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Jim D.
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11-21-2011, 05:44 PM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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Certainly they appreciate when we recognize them.
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They didn't recognize that we appreciate assistance.
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11-22-2011, 08:54 AM
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
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They didn't recognize that we appreciate assistance.
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Didn't we appreciate and recognize their efforts?
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Jim D.
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11-23-2011, 01:40 PM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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Didn't we appreciate and recognize their efforts?
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We appreciate their frequent business and trust.
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11-28-2011, 10:38 AM
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#208
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
Denver
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We appreciate their frequent business and trust.
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We frequent a business and build trust.
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11-29-2011, 05:30 PM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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We frequent a business and build trust
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Trust a business to build customer confidence.
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11-30-2011, 11:57 AM
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
Denver
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Trust a business to build customer confidence.
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Build customer confidence, adding trust and thoughtfulness.
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12-06-2011, 10:25 AM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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Build customer confidence, adding trust and thoughtfulness.
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Gain friends with thoughtfulness, trust, and confidence.
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12-06-2011, 01:25 PM
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
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Gain friends with thoughtfulness, trust, and confidence.
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Trust your friends with confidence, be happy.
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Jim D.
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01-18-2012, 01:29 PM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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Trust your friends with confidence, be happy.
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Be happy with your true friends' trust.
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01-18-2012, 04:10 PM
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
Denver
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Be happy with your true friends' trust.
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Be true with your heart and mind.
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05-05-2012, 06:02 PM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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Be true with your heart and mind.
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My heart and mind found true love.
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05-07-2012, 09:18 AM
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
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My heart and mind found true love.
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I found my heart, true love abound
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05-07-2012, 01:40 PM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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I found my heart, true love abound
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True, my heart found a soul mate.
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05-07-2012, 02:02 PM
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
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True, my heart found a soul mate.
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A soul mate? Cannot be found
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05-07-2012, 02:51 PM
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Rivet Master
BRADENTON, On The Picturesque and Sunny West Coast of Florida,
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A soul mate? Cannot be found (6 words!)
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With effort, a soul mate is found.
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05-07-2012, 03:20 PM
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Rivet Master
1999 25' Safari
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dang sorry about that: add easily at the end ... do -over:
True, my heart found a soul mate.
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A soul mate? Cannot easily be found (7)
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