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Old 08-25-2008, 05:09 PM   #197
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Old 08-30-2008, 12:44 PM   #198
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Old 10-17-2008, 06:24 PM   #202
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Old 10-19-2008, 05:00 PM   #205
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My Haiku Poetry
I'm not sure I get it
Is this right

Five Syllables first
Then in the middle, seven
Then comes five again


So a rewriting
Of your first haiku attempt
Might appear like this

Haiku Poetry
I'm not so sure I get it
Is this nearly right?

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Haiku Poetry
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