03-19-2007, 11:44 AM
#141 4 Rivet Member
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1964 22' Safari
Elyria
, Ohio
Posts: 446
Allright Maxandgeorgia are on board, I knew we could count on you to participate. Let's start this again in a new thread.
Bob
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03-19-2007, 11:49 AM
#142 Rivet Master
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old thread works
links us 2 past
tie that binds...
tires slowly groan
as wheels begin to roll
airstream in motion
cheers
2air'
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03-19-2007, 11:55 AM
#143 3 Rivet Member
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1 little 2 little 3 little rivets.. 4 little 5 little... oh sorry that's the wrong song..
how about a riveting we will go, a riveting we will go...
or maybe shine on down the highway, baby moons a rolling...
03-19-2007, 12:09 PM
#145 Rivet Master
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1995 30' Limited
Ashland
, Missouri
Posts: 2,384
Come on, old and new, er. . .former and potential writers of Haiku. . .join in and let's see where the '07 Annual Haiku contest, first proposed by Drboyd, can take us. ~G
Clearcoat aging fast
Splotches mar the silver gleam
Love her anyway
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03-22-2007, 04:53 PM
#146 4 Rivet Member
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1964 22' Safari
Elyria
, Ohio
Posts: 446
Haiku to you
Sleepy campground stirs
hatchet on log, hollow thud
sweet smell of coffee
And I want to do a rewrite of this one.
Airstream, Argosy,
nowhere to far to go see
shining sea to sea
03-27-2007, 04:42 PM
#147 Head Animal Wrangler
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2006 16' International CCD
Los Osos
, California
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That hose, she knows
Is never to be used
For washing clothes.
03-27-2007, 05:11 PM
#148 4 Rivet Member
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1964 22' Safari
Elyria
, Ohio
Posts: 446
Before the shine
Faded, jaded, blue
silver luster peeking thru
Bambi sixty two
03-28-2007, 04:35 PM
#149 1 Rivet Member
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1970 27' Overlander
ALGOMA
, Wisconsin
Posts: 8
Well In NE Wisconsin we're about 1 month away for the maiden voyage for 07. Can't wait!
Vintage Silver Beast
Our Clever Needy Mistress
Hopelessly Smitten
03-28-2007, 05:46 PM
#150 2 Rivet Member
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1970 31' Sovereign
1963 26' Overlander
Greeneville
, Tennessee
Posts: 58
Wife must not read !
I must post more often....too much I have to learn... too much lurking, but here goes.
Thirty Eight Hundred
Seemed like a good price to me
My wife knows no better
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03-28-2007, 06:30 PM
#151 moderator
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Eastern
, Washington
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Originally Posted by summerkid
BONG! eight syllables in that second line, psych.
A hiaku on form...
five syllables first
then seven in the middle
last line has five too
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03-28-2007, 06:35 PM
#152 2 Rivet Member
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1970 31' Sovereign
1963 26' Overlander
Greeneville
, Tennessee
Posts: 58
OOOPs I can't count
I Goofed...Last line should read " Wife knows no better"
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01-21-2008, 07:24 PM
#153 Rivet Master
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Norfolk, In The Beautiful Saint Lawrence Valley of Far-Northern
, New York
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Airstream Haiku
The Japanese poetry form Haiku is generally written about nature. Well what could be more "natural" on this forum than Airstream? The haiku form is 5 syllables, then 7 , then 5 again to complete a poem. Here is mine to start things off: Silver chariot Freedom of the open road Airstream motorhome
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01-21-2008, 08:29 PM
#154 Rivet Master
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already big thread,
much haiku 4 you 2 view...
read here, add yours too!
http://www.airforums.com/forums/f161...test-8895.html
cheers
2air'
...
using the search tool,
honors those that came before...
a good thing 'hopper!
....
and it is NO game
haiku can be viewed by all...
don't like games, it's true!
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